Sunday, January 23, 2005

Do I Have to Do This All Over Again...

...didn't I do it right the first time?
Didn't I?
Oh, didn't I?
-Peter Tork

OK so let's play the "Which Monkee will Renee dream about tonight?" game.
First, it was Mike. Then Micky. Then Peter. Then last night it was all of them together. My bet is that tonight it will be Davy or all of them again. However, Peter's been on my mind a great deal so I wouldn't be surprised if it was him again.
So, here's how we're gonna run this deal:
2 bits say it's Peter
3 bits say it's all of them
1 bit says the night-obsession stops here

ODE TO PETER TORK
Peter, oh Peter
Why have you aged?
Where once you were dreamy
Now I'm amazed
For if you had frozen
Yourself as a teen
Today I would pine after
Your entire scene
I'd chase you and find you
And make you my own
I'd whisper you're much
Better looking than Jones
And married together
I'd be satisfied
Recalling no longer
The times I have cried
For your shiny blond hair
With sideburns so cool
Would make me so happy
I'd probably drool
However
You're balding
And look nothing like
That Monkee I loved
Behind my favorite, Mike
This is why I state
With certain resolve
Reality's boring
It never evolves
I don't even like you
It's strange, but it's true
I've fallen for fiction
That's not even you!

"Me? Why me? I don't even like her anymore!"-Peter
"What? Man, a chick like that!? With a body like that and those sideburns--"-Mike

1 Comments:

At 6:37 AM, Blogger The Kozak's Daughter said...

MIKE SCRATCHING MY BELLY! I LOVE IT!
Brilliant idea and with Psyche's permission, this WILL be added to the story.
Hmm, I can't tell whether it should be a misunderstanding or if they're actually bad boys. The bad boy edge might be cool. Plus, maybe I could smooth off the edges with some sweet talk....
Wow, my portion is gonna be fun to write! Well, for me, heh heh.... I'll get on it tomorrow! :)
Well, tonight in my dreams, lol....

 

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